Ling Li Ting Cheryl
Singapore 123456
(+65)90487745
lingcheryl89@hotmail.com
8 February 2012
Alice Tan (Ms.)
Senior Human Resources Specialist (HR Business Partner)
Human Resources
Merck Pte. Ltd.
Dear Ms Alice Tan,
Position of Business Support Executive
I refer to the application for the Business Support Executive position in Merck Millipore. I'm a final year Chemical Engineering student from the National University of Singapore (NUS). I am highly interested in working, learning and being a part of the highly driven and challenging environment in the company.
Firstly, the diversity in Merck entices me as I enjoy meeting and working with new people. Having studied in NUS, I had opportunities to interact with peers from various races, nationalities and cultural backgrounds. I have worked well in a team with 2 Chinese for laboratory works for 1 year, to be on an overseas field trip in Shanghai with a group of approximately 20 students and additionally, under the mentorship and collaboration with Indonesians and Chinese Researchers during my attachment at A*STAR Institute of Chemical and Engineering Sciences for 6 months.
Secondly, on top of self-learning, I also have a passion in leading and coaching peers. I was a leader in many of my co-curricular activities such as Fencing and the Girl Guides’ group. As the Captain and Trainer, I led and motivated several less experienced peers through encouraging them to sign up for competitions despite it being daunting for novices. To improve myself, I communicated and exchanged ideas with external club and national fencers, as well as learned from them. In the Girl Guides’, as the Patrol Leader whom was in-charge of the progress and welfare of more than 8 members. I was constantly aware of their progress report and encouraged them to take on self-initiated projects and awards out of the norm.
In sync with Merck’s dedication to continuous drive to improve and innovate, I am constantly on the lookout to propose better solutions to improve my working environments. Be it a school project or in a workplace, I always feel that with the ever-changing workforce and people’s needs, improvements of any scale or form, can always be made. Having performed laboratory works at A*STAR, I always sought for improvements in every task I perform, such as reducing the time taken even for the simple task of samples weighing. As a part-time service crew at Udders Ice Cream Pte Ltd, I always looked to increase work efficiency and customers’ satisfaction such as implementing the concept of specialization at peak hours, looking out for customers with special needs etc.
Lastly, I am enticed in working in a fast-paced and challenging environment. Having been placed in stressful working environments before, such as handling Tax Compliance forms in KPMG and Inland Revenue Authority of Singapore, I believe that I have adequate composure and working attitude to drive me to strive hard in demanding working environments.
I sincerely hope that I would be considered for the recruitment of the Business Support Executive position. I can be contacted at 9xxxxxxx (Mobile) and also via email at lingcheryl89@hotmail.com.
Thank you so much for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Cheryl Ling
Hello, overall your format's fine and here are my suggestions:
ReplyDelete"Having studied in NUS, I HAVE had opportunities"
"a team with 2 PRC(?) Chinese for laboratory works"
"more than 8 members." I think you meant to put a comma there?
"collaboration with Indonesians" Indonesian should be fine?
"I have worked well in a...." The whole sentence is lengthy. Perhaps you can cut it shorter at "additionally"?
That's all. :)
Hi Cheryl,
ReplyDeleteGreat application letter done. However, i realised that you did not address the skills that you possessed to how you can benefit Merck with them in the 2nd and 3rd paragraph. Do consider amending them and with Ming Yan suggestions, you are on your way to receiving a call from Merck soon!
hi mingyan and reynold, thanks for your feedback :) will work on it! see you guys tmr ((:
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